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Propontis

Fiction
Stephen Pimentel

Propontis

West of the Bosporus, the wilds began. Ancient tides whispered on the breeze across the land. A Persian outpost clung defiantly to the frontier, encircled by high stone walls, ramparts built of rough-hewn blocks and crowned with battlements, forming an imposing barrier against the wilderness.

Fresh from his patrol, Lukos entered the heavily fortified gateway, nodding to the guards at watch. He was a Greek mercenary sworn to the Persian command, his three years of service nearing their end, and he found himself pondering the path that lay ahead. As he passed through the gate into the settlement, he smelled the woodsmoke in the air. He was struck by the lines of hardship on the faces of the settlers, their hearts heavy with thoughts of the far-off lands of their birth and the ever-present threat of the wild. They sensed an unspoken truth: this wilderness was more than frontier—it was the domain of strange spirits, wardens of a land resisting conquest.

As argent moonlight draped the outpost, the settlers’ voices fell to whispers, their unease joining the sound of the wind in the oaks and pines, the call of the nightingale and hooting of the owl. Lukos absorbed the scene, his reflections as turbulent as the world he traversed. He watched Artabanus approach, the evening’s calm their sole companion. The young Persian soldier had recently been assigned by the commander to join his patrol. Lukos liked the young man’s candor and habit of reflection, rare among soldiers, and they had become friends.

“You wear Persia’s dreams as armor,” Lukos observed, his voice a gruff whisper. “Is the weight of empire a burden to you?”

Eyes alight with fervor, Artabanus replied, “A burden? No, a mantle. Persia’s power will bring order to these savage lands.”

Lukos’ laugh was a dry rustle, his gaze heavy with past wars. “Order? Through many seasons I have served order, yet I find it to be as fleeting as the morning dew.”

They stepped together into the commander’s hall to report and receive new orders. The commander stood within a knot of soldiers, a pillar of composure. His armor, ornate yet worn from battle, marked his station and history. His presence was rock-like—stoic and immovable. A grizzled beard bordered lips shaped by the weight of command, his gaze calm and resolved, tempered by uprisings and deceit. Silver threaded his dark hair, marking years of campaigning.

Before Lukos and Artabanus could speak, a man staggered into the hall, a Persian scout, his wool tunic sticking to sweat-soaked skin. Weariness was etched into his features, and his skin was smudged by his journey’s grime. His dark eyes flickered with urgency. Black hair, matted to his forehead, framed his desperate countenance.

He forced himself to attention and saluted the commander. “Sir! Zalmoxis has rallied the Thracians.” He gulped a breath before continuing. “He claims divine voice, warning that they must repel us or suffer everlasting subjugation.” The gravity of his message kindled dread among the soldiers, faces carved with worry and disbelief. Zalmoxis was renown as a shaman and Thracian unifier.

The commander spoke to Lukos and Artabanus, his voice carrying the weight of urgency, “The threat is near. Hurry west to the fort safeguarding our lands. Go now. Every hour is critical.”

Lukos, reflecting the commander’s determination, nodded. Artabanus, with the ardor of the untested, saluted.

A secret phrase, a quotation in old Persian, was entrusted to them—keys to the fort’s gate. They prepared to traverse the wilds. Their departure left behind a mix of aspiration and trepidation.

Along the westward path they ran, Lukos as silent and sure as the forest’s own shadows, Artabanus trailing with an air of wonder tinged with dread. The landscape was both magnificent and merciless. Great trees stood sentinel, their leaves rustling. The ground beneath them was a mosaic of ferns and foliage, alive with a subtle thrum. Each step was a foray into the unknown, a flirtation with an ever-watchful presence.

Creatures of story prowled these domains, sovereigns of their uncharted territories. A bear crossed their path, its rumble a declaration of rule. Lukos held its stare with an unspoken understanding, an acknowledgment of respect. As if an agreement had been made, the bear vanished into the thicket as quickly as it had come.

“Nature’s decree,” Lukos’ said, his voice a whisper. “Might and reticence, Artabanus. The bear saw us as fleeting shadows in its realm.”

Artabanus, hand on his blade, sought Lukos’ eyes. “Are we trespassers here?” he inquired.

With a wry half-smile, Lukos eyed the terrain before them. “Perhaps. Yet the wild holds no court. It lives, and within it, we must carve our way.”

The path grew narrow and overgrown. They navigated the woodland, aware of unseen adversaries. Lukos glided like a cat, his gaze piercing through the foliage. Artabanus, poised and tense, mirrored his vigilance. The forest embraced them in a maze of shadow and whisper.

The stillness shattered as three Thracian scouts erupted from the brush, their war cries slicing the quiet. Tattoos, tales of battles divine, adorned their skin, wreathing them with spells. Their leader, a formidable presence with a hawk’s piercing gaze, brandished a long spear. He wore a helmet of bronze with a forward-curving peak.

Lukos and Artabanus reacted quickly to meet their charge. Iron sang against iron, a harsh symphony amidst the forest’s murmur. Lukos, an artist of death, wielded his sword with a veteran’s grace. His every deflection and thrust reflected a deadly precision. Artabanus, green but fierce, moved with the vigor of unrestrained youth, a foil to Lukos’ lethal calm.

The Thracians unleashed a driving assault, their every blow forceful as the tide. In their eyes, Lukos saw the blazing embers of honor; these were no savages but defenders of their native land. The fray swirled in a grim dance amidst the smell of pine, blood, and sweat. Lukos and Artabanus became a maelstrom of resolve.

As swords beat their unforgiving measure, Lukos’ mettle proved decisive. A fortuitous stroke sent his sword through the Thracian leader’s heart. The warrior’s eyes blazed briefly before death took him, his weapon clattering to the ground.

The clash, though it seemed to stretch time, was but a swift storm of ferocity. The Thracian scouts, valiant though they were, succumbed to Lukos and Artabanus’ mastery. The last scout, fighting with the ferocity of a tempest, finally succumbed.

As the echoes of combat died away, yielding to the wilderness’ sighs, Lukos and Artabanus stood among the dead Thracians. Lukos, breathing heavily yet with eyes bright, contemplated the scene, his face etched with solemnity. In the silenced grove, the warriors beheld the toll of conflict, exacted in blood upon the earth.

***

The men found a nook, sheltered by large rocks, where they dared to build a small fire and rest. Flames capered, warding off the night’s grasp. The wild’s nocturne surrounded them. It was Lukos who broke their silence, his voice resounding as if from a cistern.

“In these lands,” he said, peering into the blaze as though it held the story of the world, “the struggle for survival is a ceaseless contest of mortals against the gods. It goes beyond the clash of arms, reaching into a battle of wills—the resolve to persevere, to conquer not just the foe before you, but the adversary within.”

His words drifted with the smoke, ascending to the jeweled heavens. Artabanus listened, firelight flickering in his gaze.

“Conquest,” Artabanus asked, “is it not proof of our strength, our will to mold the earth to our vision? To spread our way of life upon these lands?”

Lukos considered the youth, a faint, reflective smile touching his lips. “Perhaps,” he conceded, “but at what price does this conquest come? In our zeal to tame the wilderness, we risk a part of ourselves. The Thracian defiance serves as a reminder: there is a strength in the wild.”

The fire’s intermittent crackles seemed to underscore Lukos’ sentiments, throwing their faces into striking relief against the night. Artabanus sat in thought, considering Lukos’ words.

“The wilderness,” Lukos said, his gaze ascending to the night sky, “mirrors life itself— chaotic, wild, yet deeply beautiful. Our battles for survival or conquest are whispers in its timeless breadth. It is here that we discern the measure of our natures.”

The fire waned, yet the words spoken by its light lingered, resonating within.

***

With the first light, Lukos and Artabanus pressed on, the end of their journey utmost in minds. The fort, still unseen, beckoned them onward. As they made their way through the forest, they heard the distant, haunting cadence of chanting and the throbbing of drums. The Thracians? Taking care to remain concealed, they sought out the sound.

In a glade surrounded by time-worn trees, they espied Zalmoxis’ encampment. A portrait of warlike might and spiritual zeal unfurled before them. Zalmoxis himself, his flame-hued hair stark against the dawn’s glow, was engaged in a ritual both solemn and somber. Lukos and Artabanus beheld a rite of devotion that preceded any law of kings. Zalmoxis’ summons swelled, a call to the spirits dwelling in wood, sky, and water.

The earth trembled with vital power as Zalmoxis stood, cradled by the forest’s embrace. His resonant voice cascaded through the clearing, invoking forces that lurked within the underbrush and rode the breezes. At his feet lay a sacrificial bull, once a giant of the earth, its crimson offering seeping into the loam, a libation to the Thracian gods.

The atmosphere was thick with the incense of smoldering herbs rising in the sun’s mottled beams. The scent of the offering mingled with that of the earth. As Zalmoxis intoned his chants, drumbeats surged—each pulse a reverberation of the land’s own rhythm. His tattooed warriors were ringed around him, their bodies streaked with the pigment of the soil, their gaze alight with fervor.

With the cessation of drums, the chant’s end, the world appeared to pause, expectant. Zalmoxis, arms outstretched skyward, embraced the silent witness of the gods above and the earth beneath. His sacrifice bound his warriors’ destinies with the implacable will of nature.

In the hush, Lukos and Artabanus grasped the weight of their charge. The flames of Thracian resolve leapt before them. The fort must be warned of the peril now so near. They withdrew into the embrace of shadow, their thoughts churning with tactics and schemes. The day ahead promised a reckoning, with the fates of settler and Thracian alike hanging in the balance.

Their resolution was forged in necessity, their plan fraught with peril. They would part ways—Lukos to hasten the warning to the fort, Artabanus to divert the Thracian force with a bold ruse.

With a final handclasp, Lukos departed towards the fort, his motion a silent, determined glide. His mission’s urgency lent him a ghostly fleetness, his figure melding with the clinging mists of dawn.

Artabanus, in turn, braced for his role. His eyes held a strength beyond the wielding of a sword. Moving away from the fort and towards the Thracian encampment’s fringe, he aimed to create a diversion, a feint to attract Zalmoxis’ warriors, affording Lukos crucial time.

The young Persian advanced with a careful grace, his senses attuned to each murmur of the wild. He positioned himself judiciously, just visible from the camp. With an intake of breath, he began a shrill whistle—high pitch cascading to low—the traditional call of Persian scouts. His signal drew notice as expected. Thracian warriors turned towards the sound’s origin. Artabanus lured them into pursuit, threading through the forest. His pulse raced with his footsteps, fueled by the intensity of his flight. He continued his ruse, signaling feigned companions, drawing the Thracians farther from their stronghold. He moved with the zeal of duty, deeper into the woods.

Artabanus’ flight ended in a clearing, a natural amphitheater ringed by the foliage of the forest. This was to be his arena of final resistance. As the Thracian pursuers converged, he positioned himself carefully, his back to a towering tree and his blade agleam in the nascent light. He met their advance with the skill of a warrior, the ardor of an unyielding soul. Each thrust and parry of his sword was a dance of audacity and a bid for glory.

The Thracians, initially confounded by the lone warrior’s ferocity, rallied with equal valor. The clearing resounded with the timbre of combat. Outnumbered, Artabanus fought with relentless determination, his foes’ fall marking his skill but also heralding his inevitable end. Battle’s fatigue began to weigh on his limbs. With a last surge of might, he felled another opponent.

Yet, as his adversary dropped, so too did Artabanus, brought down by the wounds that mapped his defeat. He fell to the earth, and with him, a hush fell on the woods. As he lay, breaths shallow, his eyes fixed upon the boughs above, his final thoughts free of dread. Artabanus had secured the gift of time for Lukos and the fort’s defenders, his legacy inscribed among those who meet the night’s embrace with the undying flame of courage.

***

As twilight claimed the frontier, Lukos stepped from the edge of the wood. The fort stood as a bastion of Persian craft, a rugged assemblage of timber and stone against the evening sky. The sentinels at its entrance, icons of the empire’s discipline, were clad in the gleaming mail and leather of the border guard. They remained steadfast, their postures rigid against the night’s advance. Their armament caught the last light, scales of a great serpent coiled around the empire’s edge. With their spears sharp and gazes sharper, they appraised the Greek warily, hands ready at their weapons.

Lukos spoke the passphrase, and the gates’ heavy timber opened its reluctant jaws to admit him.

The fort’s commander, as much a part of the stronghold as the masonry itself, stood with unflagging resolve. His eyes probed with the acumen of a tactician, his bearing reflecting the gravity of one who knew he held lives in his charge.

Lukos told what he had seen in the forest: a Thracian host gathered nearby, a sacrifice made to their gods. The mercenary’s reputation preceded him, and his warning took root within the garrison. A storm of Thracian fury approached, and the hour to fortify had arrived.

The fort awoke in frenetic energy, its evening quiet shattered. Lukos, versed in the art of war, dove into the broil, his directives slicing through disarray. The garrison braced the ramparts, buttressing them with timber. Archers prepared their posts on the walls, quivers bristling with arrows, bows strung in anticipation. As the fortress rang with preparation, Lukos guided the efforts, his gaze vigilant for the Thracian tide. The precious moments afforded by Artabanus’ valorous feint granted them a respite against oblivion. Every edge whetted, every wall bolstered, every heart steeled for battle stood as a tribute to his friend’s sacrifice.

***

Dawn’s light crowned the fort with gold, and with it, the air trembled with anticipation. On the horizon, the arrayed Thracian host emerged from the wilderness. Zalmoxis, precise as a raptor in its descent, marshaled his forces in ordered lines. They descended upon the fort not in chaos, but in practiced assault. They wielded not crude weapons, but spears and swords tempered in the hidden forges of the Rhodope Mountains. Zalmoxis, his hair the color of the blood, did not simply lead; he was the vanguard’s tip, his name their rallying cry.

The Persian defenders, clad in iridescent scales, remained steadfast. Their archers rained death from above, while Lukos moved with the infantry through the melee, his blade finding the gaps in the Thracian leather. The field transformed into a tapestry of loss, the earth quenched by the outpouring of warriors’ blood. The cries of the wounded soared over the battle’s tumult, a wail amidst the iron’s song.

Despite Zalmoxis’ ferocity and the Thracians’ fervor, the Persian bulwark held. The commander’s acumen and the strategic deployment of reserves sapped the Thracian onslaught, their terrible force spent against the fort’s resolve.

In the battle’s aftermath, the Persians surveyed the field, victors in a costly trial. The Thracian bravery proved the spirit of those who would rather die than live under another’s rule. The Persians pondered the import of their victory: the will of the free is the anvil on which their empire must be forged.

Lukos also surveyed the vista, his armor dented and smeared. Beyond lay the wilds, unfettered and immeasurable. His thoughts turned to Artabanus, the flame of his life extinguished. In his young friend, Lukos saw the empire’s ambition, bright and bold until it breaks against the spirit of the wild. Though the Thracians were beaten back, they were not conquered. Their spirit flowed with the ever-flowing river of nature—changing, yet constant.

The toll of conquest weighed on Lukos. The empire sought to seize the wild, but the cost lay clearly before him. A weariness enveloped him, borne of a battle that was more than a claim of soil or power, but a clash of ways of life. The Thracian tenacity stood in stern contrast to the empire’s might. In this wild land, the edicts of kings faltered, yielding to the unbridled nature of man.

The clamor of battle fading into memory, Lukos rested on a stony rise, the landscape stretched below—a tableau marred yet majestic, under the sky’s bleeding hues. His eyes, mirrors of a soul tempered by battle, absorbed the fiery horizon. His mind waged its own silent skirmishes, considering each maneuver and blow. In the surge of conflict, Lukos saw man’s relentless war against man, as continual as the waves lapping on Propontis’ shores.

The clash of iron, the lament of the vanquished, resounded with the struggle for power, land, and survival. Lukos thought of the world’s constant flow, of war as the father of all. Amidst these ceaseless currents, he saw the nature of man laid bare, forever caught in the throes of conflict and change. In the Thracians, he saw a nobility that eclipsed the act of combat: an image of nature’s will, a force as relentless as the wilderness itself. He felt a kinship with these warriors of the wild. Forged in the arena of strife, he too was shaped by a world ruled by iron.

He pondered the rise and fall of empires, the rhythm of lands conquered and reclaimed. Within life’s loom, he was a single thread, woven into the cloth of man’s pursuit. In the moonlight, his gaze lingered on the edge of the Thracian wilds, unbridled and free. The stars blinked indifferently upon both empire and wild, silent witnesses to an endless dance. The wilderness would persist, untouched like the night sky.

At sunrise, as the new light cast long shadows and the sky brushed in soft hues, Lukos set forth. The fort, bustling with repairs, felt distant, a fleeting grasp at order imposed in a resistant world. He traversed with deliberate steps, a man who had served many kings now walking an uncharted path. The wilderness called out—an offer of splendor and might. Lukos sought solace from other men’s conflict. The wilderness, with its dense woods and unseen trails, whispered of the world’s true face.

As he walked further into Thrace, the sounds of settlement gave way to the wild’s chorus—the susurration of foliage, the soughing of the breeze, the faint cry of raptors aloft. Lukos ventured into the forest’s mosaic, his figure melding into dappled shadow and light.

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